Last week I wrote a narrative about Christmas. I wrote about a banana named Aldi and how he hates Christmas but I'll let you read my story to find out what happens. What I like about my story is that all my characters are fruits and vegetables. I loved writing and creating the story but found it hard to make sound very descriptive. I would be so grateful if you could comment on anything you like about my story.
Kia ora Emma,
ReplyDeleteWhat a fantastic story that you have crafted Emma. You have taken parts from the short film and linked these ideas well throughout your story. You have used a range of language features that make this writing really effective. Tino pai!
Ma te wa,
Miss Hickling