Today I wrote a persuasive text about why cats are better than dogs. I wrote about their affection and easy hygiene as well telling you that cats only need three things and their food, water, and love. Those three things will make any cat happy. I really enjoyed talking about cats because I can't have them since my dad's allergic but maybe someday I'll be allowed. I found it hard to make my text persuasive and informative. Please comment on anything you like about my writing.
Cats
I’ve always thought that cats are better than dogs. So in this piece of writing, I will explain why cats are better than dogs.
Firstly cats are independent which means they won’t constantly be begging for attention like dogs do which can annoying when you’re trying to work. They also love to cuddle and lick without covering you in slobber. Although they still cough up hairballs those are pretty easy to clean up.
Secondly, these felines are fairly easy to take care of because they just need food, water, and love. Not to mention that they don’t cost much to take care of either, only about six hundred a year while dogs are a little more pricey.
Lastly, the fact that cats just dig a hole and do their business although most cat owners have a litter box that you do need to empty put is better scooping up poop. Cats also clean themselves and are sure to never get too dirty.
So, in conclusion, I have told you why cats are better than dogs as well as needing less care there are also some of the most loveable pets ever.
Morena Emma,
ReplyDeleteI really admire some of the reasons why you believe cats are better than dogs. I thought you did a pretty good job of trying to persuade your audience. Next time you could add even more detail and examples. Have you ever written a persuasive text about cats and dogs before?
Ngā mihi,
Miss Hickling