Thursday, 20 May 2021

My Tropical Paradise


 This week we looked at an image of a tropical island with mountains and an aquamarine sea this was also our inspiration for our writing this week. We had to write a descriptive piece of writing about it and describe what we could hear, see, smell,taste and feel. This piece of writing inspired us to write using our senses which are things we will use all our lives. I enjoyed writing about what I could feel because  it made me feel like I was really there taking it all in. I found it challenging to write about what I could taste because if you're looking a t an image you often can't taste anything.

                          Tropical   paradise

I’m welcomed with the smell of the crisp salted sea air and greeted with the scent of the freshly picked coconuts.

Clear ,aquamarine water, elevated coconut tree’s, chalky white clouds twirl around the azure sky. Enormous jagged mountain tops tickle the snow white clouds.

Waves splash along the seashore, coconut tree leaves rustle in the wind.

Soft warm sand, a warm island breeze and sharp pearly sea shells stick out of the soft sand.

Island air is flowing into my mouth like  a refreshing drink of lemonade.

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