This week for writing we had to write a descriptive piece of writing because he had to describe our bedroom and what it looks like. I enjoyed sharing my mixed opinions of my bedroom because I like but I dislike it even more. I found it challenging to describe what I could smell or taste in my room because there's not really something in your room that you can taste.Next time I would add more feelings to my writing because I didn't really have many
My Chaotic Bedroom
My least favorite part of my house is my bedroom because it’s messy, chaotic, crazy and has absolutely no view. My older sister is always running in and out so there’s never a moment's peace and quiet.
My room has two high beds on one half of the room and another wall is lined with wardrobes for our fine clothes. Two large windows line anthor wall. Dark blue curtains frame the windows. Stuff’s randomly scattered everywhere and craft supplies are stuffed under the beds. A large gymnastics box stands proudly just to the side of the window.
My room is the messiest room in the house and my mum gave up trying to keep it clean a long time ago because I can never keep it tidy for more than a few days.
My bedroom has a hard wooden floor, ugly grey plaster walls and the whole room smells of floral perfume, a light breeze is flowing through the open window. My sister likes to keep her finger tapping along the keyboard of a computer..
So, I still dislike my bedroom because it's alway dull, crazy and chaotic.
Written By Emma R
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