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This week I have been learning about how to use powerful language.
I enjoyed editing it because seeing where you spelt what wrong improves it.
I found it challenging to do since I had know one to ask questions.
My digital learning object shows my writing.
Kia ora Emma, great to see you experimenting with some of your vocabulary. I particularly like the sentence 'soft velvety fur stroking against my fingers'. Next time it would be even better if you could write in passed tense. Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments: Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let me know that you have read, watched or listened to my blog Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question
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Kia ora Emma, great to see you experimenting with some of your vocabulary. I particularly like the sentence 'soft velvety fur stroking against my fingers'. Next time it would be even better if you could write in passed tense. Ma te wa, Miss Hickling.
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