Autumn
Eye - catching, scrumple
Flattening, tumbling, whirling
Gathering up the leaves
Autumnal equinox
Today I was learning about how to make our class cinquain poem better.
I enjoyed finding synonyms because there were many options.
I found it challenging to pick one because they were all cool
My digital learning object shows my poem.
Next time I would change my final word because I'm not sure if you know what it means.
I like your poem very much, Emma, short but clear. For me, it is also a bit funny to read about Autumn at the end of Spring! oma
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